I love everything that you write! Your structure is perfect and the rhyming and flow are great. It's awesome, everything is wonderful!! I have no advice because it requires none. Your words expressed great emotion...you held a complete thought. Man!! You're great!

This was an amazing poem Sarah. The physical elements that you put in it, like punching the wall and how love busted through the seams, it all fitted perfectly and It was very vivid. I don't know what you were thinking when you wrote this, but it seems like it could be made into a movie to me o.O I dunno, thats just what I pictured as I was reading. Like a murder mystery/romance kind of thing. You did an excellent job with this. I love the whole concept behind it too. It's hard to comprehend at first, which makes you keep reading. This was a lovely peice. I love you!

Take Care,
Renee

Great job!! so glad its not true! ur writing is so effin awesome!! keep it up. take care XXXXX
JL

Powerful. I felt it x