Comments : Monkey on my back

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    Lol i have no clue what this is about...maybe the experience of drugs? IDK i've never been high, so i wouldn't know..but damn..i thought it had to do with monkeys lol this was really good anyways, u used some HUGE words, and i had no idea what most of them meant, lol but dats cool cuz it was good! keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Goth

    Now this is deeeeep! WOW, kinda speechless on this one, kinda like a suffocated poetic short story,kinda sorta way...mind boggling?!? I'm going to have to give you a 5/5 on that!

  • 18 years ago

    by Hard2Heal

    Drew, you never cease to amaze me. i truely do appreciate your writing, it is so beautiful and seems to always have so much feeling and thought put into it. I would tell you that you could change things and write things in it differently but then i would be asking you to change all the things that make it as beautiful as it really is. you inspire me as a writer to take up new ways of writing my poems and putting things. thank you so much! keep up all the amazing work. Much luv~ Lynds

  • 18 years ago

    by Bursonater

    I think that the general category of love will suffice for the category. It flowed well but in a kind of un-understood way, perhaps it flowed too well and made the poem go too fast for understanding? The only thing that bugs me is that I can't visualise a certain image it morphs constantly into something new, I liked it and hope that you actually appreciate the criticism rather than take offence in it. It is a great poem in the end. :p

  • 18 years ago

    by SweetSuicide

    Deep and wonderfully writin you got talent keep writing..you are one the most talent peoeple i knone on this site ..with all this great work you got..wiah i could be able to do that....5/5