Just thought I'd let you know tha I think this is a great poem. Its real and so honest! Great job 5/5...keep it up and thank you for sharing your poem with us!

Wahoo i think me poems are better than yours

Very deep woha...still very good poem

love Dean oxoxox

OMG!! This was Amazing. Love the flow to it. Gave me goosebumps. Really something!!!

I agree with Gesselle, it's honest.
Awesome stuff.

It was so good it was honest

Deep poem.. amazing lyrics, very realistic + great msg..
well done,keep it up!

Wow!
I LOVED this!
This was so realistic, and sad.
I enjoyed the flow, and the imagery was great.
It almost made me cry.
5/5

Sad, i love it your so talented and all, i really really like your poems

Aww this is so sad(tears)...its vrey good i like your style! will i like is line right here it touch me

*two head lights
and a toot of a horn
i really miss you
my heat is torn*

keep up the good work!!!

This has brought tears to my eyes...if there's one thing that always gets to me it's drunk drivers as I lost a friend to one a while back..

I loved how you did it from different perspectives in this piece, I found that original and creative, and it made for a very good read.

Despite being filled with so much melancholy and heartbreak, this was still wonderfully written.