Comments : Murder or suicide?

  • 12 years ago

    by JodiieBaybeh

    Wow i thought that was amazing !

  • 12 years ago

    by Goth

    This was a very touching poem, I really think you should consider the people you would hurt that really care for you, Trust me, theres someone for everyone, you just need to be patient!Very good job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Simple answer....both. He may have killed your heart, no one can live without a heart. But only you would have been responsible for taking your life. It's a powerful piece, and wonderfully written. I think maybe he needs to read it...

  • 12 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    It's ahrd to know which it is, I'de say suicide though. But in a very big way, it was murder. great poem though! keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Thats a very hard question to answer hun. your poem left me speachless, its very well written, the passion I can feel from reading that is amazing. But hun, be cafeful, you deserve to live and love again... life happens when your busy making other plans... maybe if you just gave him some space he'll see the loss with out you really leaving you know? but please be careful... dont cut too deep.. Im sorry I have no words of wsidom for you.. but the poem is ace

    Thankyou for the comment... if you could check out my other stuff it would be awesoem:)

    Love Jenn x0x0x take care *hugs*

  • 12 years ago

    by sadnessinshadows

    Wow.. that was an amazing piece of poetry. and to answer your question..murder or suicide?? id have to say murder, because it was him who killed her, *well not literally*! even though she committed the act. as if he was inside her rooting her on!

  • 12 years ago

    by Naima

    Wow, really good. It has a very gripping message. Along with a mystic ambiance to it. Are you psychic? Anyway, it's quite something!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Naima

    I do hope your friend calls, sometimes that happens to me. I'll forsee things hapening to me, well it's a real good poem. I do hope everything looks up for you. Please seek out support and help, you are a great writer and you have alot to live for so please don't take your life....

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    Omgosh!!!!! this made me cry, its sooooo sad. its an amazing poem.. wow you dont even know how i feel. whew

  • 12 years ago

    by Esmeralda

    Wow really powerful poem i don't even know what to say it's a hard question to anwser cuz in a way it's both!

  • 12 years ago

    by ~*Curious Me*~

    I can really relate i feel the same way.With out him there is no point in living.But i jave to pull myself together and so do you.I stop cuting myself and i believe in you.You can to.
    great poem 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Touching poem with a great flow

  • 12 years ago

    by SweetSuicide

    Wow deep and emotion poem..5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Very interesting. I think it would be both because murder is what they boy did which just wanted to be friends with you so it broke you all inside. Then the other part is what you did which was your own suicide. So really both are the actions of this poem. you did an amazing job. And i so hope your doing okay. I really don't want you to get hurt or anything i'm here if you need to talk. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 12 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Omg there was such deep emotionin this poem....and to answer your ?>...i'd say its both....deffinatly both....this poem brought tears tomah eyes and the flow was so beautiful....5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Interesting poem. The flow wasn't consistant. You can still work on that. Keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    This is increadably sad.. I belive that it would be suicide not murder though because he didnt physically kill her. Im am REALLY sorry if this story is true and if it is I think that a) you should try and get some help and b) try to talk to ur friend again. take care I hope everything is alrite

  • 12 years ago

    by Jamie

    It'd be suicide....duh...he wouldn't kill you....you would.....don't blame people for what you do to yourself yeah he may have been a jerk but your the one who chooses what to do with that fact...

    but he doesn't care
    Who her heart will mend ?

    dosnt make sense

    interesting poem really good indeed ive had the exact same situation 16 years down the drain but it ended up okay in the end stick in it....dont commit *suicide....that wouldn't help anybody

  • 12 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    Her soul was hurting sore
    try 'her soul was so sore' and i don't know about the way you spelled 'sore'.
    This is suicide because it would be your choice to pick up that knife and strike yourself, and he would never had touched you. true that he caused it, but it is impossible to inflict murder upon yourself. he would have caused your suicide. and don't give up, i know EXACTLY how you feel! death wont make things any better, it just brings pain to others, and if you are religious, remember that it is a PERMENANT sin to kill yourself. don't take the cowards way out, stay strong, be remembered as someone brave, not a spineless jellyfish. stand tall. plus, if you try to ignore him for a while, i'll bet my finger that he'll eventually talk to you again. hang in there, it gets better!

  • 12 years ago

    by bucky

    The poem is well done ... the shocking truth at the end is what concerns me ... plz don't hurt urself any more ... things will get better i am sure u will meet some1 better than him one day i am sure of it