This was a very touching poem, I really think you should consider the people you would hurt that really care for you, Trust me, theres someone for everyone, you just need to be patient!Very good job!
13 years ago
by Jason Meres
Simple answer....both. He may have killed your heart, no one can live without a heart. But only you would have been responsible for taking your life. It's a powerful piece, and wonderfully written. I think maybe he needs to read it...
Thats a very hard question to answer hun. your poem left me speachless, its very well written, the passion I can feel from reading that is amazing. But hun, be cafeful, you deserve to live and love again... life happens when your busy making other plans... maybe if you just gave him some space he'll see the loss with out you really leaving you know? but please be careful... dont cut too deep.. Im sorry I have no words of wsidom for you.. but the poem is ace
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Wow.. that was an amazing piece of poetry. and to answer your question..murder or suicide?? id have to say murder, because it was him who killed her, *well not literally*! even though she committed the act. as if he was inside her rooting her on!
I do hope your friend calls, sometimes that happens to me. I'll forsee things hapening to me, well it's a real good poem. I do hope everything looks up for you. Please seek out support and help, you are a great writer and you have alot to live for so please don't take your life....
Very interesting. I think it would be both because murder is what they boy did which just wanted to be friends with you so it broke you all inside. Then the other part is what you did which was your own suicide. So really both are the actions of this poem. you did an amazing job. And i so hope your doing okay. I really don't want you to get hurt or anything i'm here if you need to talk. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.
This is increadably sad.. I belive that it would be suicide not murder though because he didnt physically kill her. Im am REALLY sorry if this story is true and if it is I think that a) you should try and get some help and b) try to talk to ur friend again. take care I hope everything is alrite
Her soul was hurting sore
try 'her soul was so sore' and i don't know about the way you spelled 'sore'.
This is suicide because it would be your choice to pick up that knife and strike yourself, and he would never had touched you. true that he caused it, but it is impossible to inflict murder upon yourself. he would have caused your suicide. and don't give up, i know EXACTLY how you feel! death wont make things any better, it just brings pain to others, and if you are religious, remember that it is a PERMENANT sin to kill yourself. don't take the cowards way out, stay strong, be remembered as someone brave, not a spineless jellyfish. stand tall. plus, if you try to ignore him for a while, i'll bet my finger that he'll eventually talk to you again. hang in there, it gets better!
The poem is well done ... the shocking truth at the end is what concerns me ... plz don't hurt urself any more ... things will get better i am sure u will meet some1 better than him one day i am sure of it