Comments : Murder or suicide?

  • 18 years ago

    by Ghoulishly Dead

    This def. suicide, she chose to take her life, but took it because of her broken heart from a guy who chose to be selfish.
    being a guy we can be selfish but then maybe this guy was just too dumb to realise just how precious a friendship can be until its too late.

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    This was truly an amazing work girl. This was just lovely. Very emotive, and touching.

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Wow that was great and very touching,i think i would consider it suicide,i think everyone gets hurt by someone at sometime you just have to keep your head up and good things will come to you. great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    That was an amazing poem! It almost made me cry. Dont dwell on the loss of one person. Someday someone new will come into your life and you'll wonder how you could have ever been so sad. Missing the wait isnt worth your life. Best of luck.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashlee Nicole

    Truly amazing Poem...I have to print it off and put it in my book of poems by otheres....Great Job....And just so you know...It would be suicide..And a sad sad suicide..For then You must realize..As much as the other person hurts you and makes you feel like you must not live...You in the end do make the final decision...And you must also put into account the fact that...They more then likely will yes know that, They made you feel the way you do...But If you love them so dearly as a friend..You will know that in the end, they will see their wrong doing...And you're suicide could also send them into the same place where you are now....Without the dear friend....
    Trust me I know...I almost died doing the most selfish act anyone can do, commit suicide...It hurts everyone around you...Especially the ones you love...So If you love them, don't hurt them..
    Excellent poem...
    Ash

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Well I'll answer the question first... I say it's suicide, and don't do it. I know he may seem like a friend but if he doesn't care then forget him, he doesn't deserve you. Be strong. If you want to show him then you will get better attention by standing tall than suicide(or allowing him to murder you).
    The poem was very good and powerful.
    Chin up ey. Let's face it not only would the world be loosing you, but also your poetry.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cynthia--Nasr

    Omg !! thats a very touching poem.. well u can consider it both.. he killed u in the inside nd u killed urself on the outside... trust me no guy is worth it.. i loved it.. good work

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Very amazing.. yet so sad....

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Very good n true this happens all the time but it is sooooo sad nothing is worth killing urself over 5/5 Suicide

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    One point, you wrote 'loose' where I think you meant lose. A really good poem, even though this is a very common subject on here, it has a good twist at the end. A good flow, and story making it easy to read.

    My opinion-suicide. Allowing someone to affect you so you want to end your life is still suicide. It is what YOU want, not someone else.

  • 18 years ago

    by carolina

    This poem is outstanding it gave me goosebumps.....wow.
    But the realness and the truth too it is scary no one is worth anothers life you shouldn't let a man hold you by the string of life he's foolish if he can't see what a good friend you are!!
    I hope you'll reconcider

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Oh...My...God...I love this. This is...so..wonderful! It left chills through my body and a sad story told. I love it. You deserve so much more than a 5...but anyways. Your question answered, it is a tie. For he killed her mentally, but she did the killing. Once again, beyond excellent.

    Forever I Remain,
    Sheena

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    HOLY CRAP! That was friggin amazing! I havent read anythnig that good FOR A LONG TIME!! wow i can see why it has 42 votes and is a 5.0! oh man that was awesome!! NOTHING was wrong it was PERFECT!! 5/5, WAY better then ALL MINE COMBINED!

  • 18 years ago

    by Hans Fausto

    Now thats something i cant answer...but you yourself can...find it in yourself...i know you can...this poem holds in it, a very deep message. its nicely done and well written....by the way...dont try killing yourself...youll seriously regret it...trust me...I know....bseeinya...keep on writing..:D

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Wow.... hold in there dont let someone else ruin your life that much! there are too many people out there who care for you!.

    Jacs
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa Lea

    Great poem....definately deserves the rating it has!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jordan

    Ithink i read a book about this....

  • 18 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    Suicide to me is and always will be murder, and no ne deserves it. My uncle killed himself (check out "the reality of suicide" if you wanna read about it) and i saw the other side. I was quite suicidal before it but now I see that the pain has just been passed onto other people and they're the people who cared about him.
    good poem, though thats obvious after 44 people have voted and it is on 5 (!) you have a lot of talent and you need to keep writing awesome stuff such as this, you have at least obne reason to live right there. best of luck and if you need to talk email me at souper_girl@hotmail.com
    Love and light,
    SAMMI MORRIS xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Geena

    This poem is soo good and sad. I say it would be both muder and suicide. And amelia you really should try to stop cutting, it only leads to one thing and thats death. Maybe you have nothing to live for now, but you might later. think about it. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer Fox or Jackson

    This poem was so sad and it was very well written...why won't he talk to you?...is he stupid...i dont think that you should let the thought of death make you want to kill yourself...give it time...time is the solution to everything...and if you were to ask me...i felt the poem to be about sucide...he isn't killing you, you're killing yourself...write him a letter or something and pour out your feelings...i think i'd help...well l8r, jen