Niiiiiccce...that was a beutiful poem, a little work on the flow, but overall 5/5

I love it it is so great awesome

I loved the way you wrote, usually i'm more into the rhyming ones, but i really liked it!!

:( Bad times will turn into good times...there will always be both....hopefully there will be more good times coming up for you... Nicely done poem...

xxx

Its beautiflly written & so very touching...5/5 .. good work !! pls check my poem "murder or suicide" i'd appreciate ur vote & comment

Very unique...and a creative way of saying someone took all of you in their leave. I like this --much different than "oh you broke my heart" Nicely done!!