Comments : Hidden Dreams

  • 12 years ago

    by Amit

    Ann, it's so heart touching and so well written! :-*
    5/5, take care, always believe in love, amit

  • 12 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    I can so relate to this. Such a hard thing to go through..realizing you can't be with the one you love. Beautiful poem which is the normal for you. It has a great flow to it and a message that personally touched me. Brava!

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Ann,
    This poem not only shows the love you have for the person but also shows what a terrific friend you are!! To let someone still live in your heart although love relationship could never happen is amazing to see! Your a great person Ann and a great poet!
    ~Chelsey~

  • 12 years ago

    by karen

    That was beautiful! loved it! 5/5! come comment on some of mine sometime. take care,

  • 12 years ago

    by Angie

    Such beautiful words. Its strange how things turn out in life...... God works in mysterious ways. Beautiful and heartfelt.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Ann,
    i can't even to explain how this was absolutely beautiful write, and i know this from the pure heart you've. beautiful penned!

    "the heart is sometimes wiser than the intellect."

    wishing you & your have a wonderful day, take care. hugs! bert.

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Ann,

    Wow, this was such a toucning and such a lovely write. To be so in love.
    The 8th Stanza was the one that blew me away: -

    "I live you still today
    More then words can say
    You truly touched my heart
    In an unbelieveable way."

    I read the poem 3 times already and still want to go back and read it again!

    Warm regards,

    Steve

  • 12 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I really love this poem.It flows so well and the rhyme scheme works very well.But mainly I can relate to this because I'm in such a similiar situation and this echos my own sentiments.The sadness and knowing what could have been......This really touched me.Really a great piece that says so much to those with the tragic, romantic hearts......

  • 12 years ago

    by xxamberxx

    3/5, aint as good as it could be from someone your age but it's alright x x

  • 12 years ago

    by ambika

    Beautiful and touching. something i too can relate to in a way.

    :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Loved this poem! Keep up the good work and in the meantime please read/rate/comment on my own poetry!

  • 12 years ago

    by ♥ii NEED YOU♥

    That is a good poem and i enjoyed reading it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Morgan

    Wow Girl...Thas Some MeaningFul Shit!!! Damn...That Almost Made Me Cry...I Kinda Relate To It...ButYea...Hit Me Back Sometime...!!!

    ~MoRgAn~

  • 12 years ago

    by unstated affinity

    Wow... the only thing i can say is.. incredible... 5/5... niice.. i can realte this a lot to my feeling ,because recently i just feel the same.. about somebody i like. but it is just imposibble that she will know.. T_T .. anyway keep your good work

  • 12 years ago

    by AlexPotter

    That was really really good, keep up the good work

  • 12 years ago

    by lilia

    So cute!! loved it!! please if you get a chance check out mine. thanks!!
    love always ~lilia~

  • 12 years ago

    by Ariana

    I like how your ideas come across very clearly, and also the mood you create. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Beautiful write Miss Ann! Sad story it is but everything happens for a reason. I love the way you wrote this...it flowed wonderfully. It was just beautiful! Excellent write!!! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by erely

    This piece is written just as if you had looked in my heart...so sad but at the same time so beautiful...Great Writing

  • 12 years ago

    by Brooke

    That is an awesome poem but very sad! i like it though,

    Brooke