I can so relate to this. Such a hard thing to go through..realizing you can't be with the one you love. Beautiful poem which is the normal for you. It has a great flow to it and a message that personally touched me. Brava!
This poem not only shows the love you have for the person but also shows what a terrific friend you are!! To let someone still live in your heart although love relationship could never happen is amazing to see! Your a great person Ann and a great poet!
I really love this poem.It flows so well and the rhyme scheme works very well.But mainly I can relate to this because I'm in such a similiar situation and this echos my own sentiments.The sadness and knowing what could have been......This really touched me.Really a great piece that says so much to those with the tragic, romantic hearts......
Wow... the only thing i can say is.. incredible... 5/5... niice.. i can realte this a lot to my feeling ,because recently i just feel the same.. about somebody i like. but it is just imposibble that she will know.. T_T .. anyway keep your good work