Deep, dark and Powerful! I liked it! the flow was well done and the word usage was nica and dark! well done x)

Wow. excellent poem. its really deep but had so much meaning. great job

They made you fell guilt
is that supposed to be 'feel'?
nice poem, I like the wording, it kinda shifts the idea of the poem.nice job, 4/5

Great job dark and very very powerful i really liked it great job 5/5.

Damn thts good 5/5 keep writing ur style is different n i like it!!!

Thanks, that alomost makes me want to write another poem!! lol

It is good i like it

Strong poem with a flawless flow telling it like it is great job

Really great .alot of emotion in it..5/5

Ahh, sweet sweet desposition...5/5
Nice write

Well,.. this is sort of a confusing poem.. i think the subject of this poem is Emotion, personified. if im wrong, ill waste a lot of time from here on out lol.. but.. that premise has a LOT of potential for marvelous thoughts/idea.. the only problem being, its a trick one to write about, which may have factored into your piece.. every time i read this i get more and more confused n i dont wanna comment on something that i have the wrong idea about.. could u provide a brief explanation and get at me when ur done? thanx! pZ oput.. it has ghood flow and rhyme th0.

5/5 lara... nice work ! again... is v different from the other poems i've read on the site... they're also small & intense... full of feel...a rush of emotions that comes out this way... good work !
god bless !
amy

Woh. this poem was weally deep. i liked it : ) 5/5 so can you peaz comment on one of mine now?

Wow...... that was a wonderful poem! I swear I loved it. 5/5

Great poem i loved it 5/5

Hey, nice poem, i enjoyed it, very well written !!
xxx cici xxx

To clarify for drew what this poem is about.. i wrote it to mean that it's about how some people pretend to love you just to see you in pain. And when you realise this and try to push them away, your emotions, feelings whatever, start to make you feel guilty even though you didn't do anything, so it's about just letting go, even though it's harder than it seems. but of course, it might mean something different to someone else.. well yah enjoy

I liked that poem. theres more about it i like but i cant bring it to words