Comments : Swinging to Peace

  • 18 years ago

    by mayme

    Very interesting. I love the repetition, it really worked in this poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ali

    Cool nice job gerra i like it..although i do think you said back and forth One to many times lol. but good job all the same i like it

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Interesting poem and effective style. I quite like this one you described something and kept moving along the same wave length. Good Job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    I liked the vision of swinging back and forth, back and forth. I miss the days when the swings could take away all my troubles. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dora

    Yeah i really like that gerra and i love how everyone can thik about there times when we were little