Comments : The words I cannot say

  • 18 years ago

    by john foster

    Very well written.. i wish some1 felt this way about me bleh.. :).. im usually the one on the other end

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Incredible from start to finish! keep it up! Lxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Desi

    This is a really good poem. I like it alot . It really shows alot of feelings believe it or not I know how it feels kinda. I have been in a relationship for like a yr and 2 months. It so amazing but im so scared to loose him. good job on the poem 10 pts for you.comment back plz. if you wanna read some of my poems that would be great.

  • 18 years ago

    by erely

    This was beautifully said....Well Done

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow
    that is an amazing poem
    keep it up ! uve got amazing skill!
    sarah x x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by PassingAngel

    That is exactly how I feel right now. I love this poem. 5/5
    -PassingAngel

  • 18 years ago

    by Brooke

    That is awesome! You are an amazing writer! Keep writing! That was just wow!

    Brooke

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica K

    I love this poem .. its exactly how i feel about a guy at my high school .. keep writing
    love jess-xo

  • 18 years ago

    by Carolina

    Wow thats deep i almost started crying cuz like im going through something similar to that

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    You did really good on this poem. . .the words flowed smoothly along the page and it described all the love you feel for this person...so many people can relate to this. . . .i wish i could say that i could but i can't but i'm glad that you know what real love is.......keep up the good work . . . . .check out my work sometime (lifetimecowgirl)
    amber

  • 18 years ago

    by wahwahweewah

    I love your poem.. it is almost exactly how i feel about the guy i'm crushin on right now. Good job keep it up. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by angela

    OMG!!! i love it!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by -Beauty-

    Bravo...Bravo..that was wonderful....

  • 18 years ago

    by Titi

    I love this peom cuz i can relate to how u feel !!

  • 18 years ago

    by Lithium

    Thats really good, i feel i can relate as there is a guy i havnt' told how i feel about him either, great job, i think u should tell him hun xox rc

  • 18 years ago

    by Bunny

    That was so sweet who is it 4? can u comment on my newest 1

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    I really love this poem! and I totally understand the situation...it sounds JUST like me..so much so that its weird! Good Job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Seductive

    That was nice u should check me out !!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Awwww ur poem was so sweet that gurl/guyz very lucky keep up tha gud work!!!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aw.. i love it.. awesome job 5/5!! keep it up