Comments : Thoughts on an Empty Day

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    Please vote and comment. it would be much appreciated. thank you.

  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Aaron... another great poem!! Two thumbs up... if I had more, I'd say 10, but I don't have that many thumbs ;). Anyways... I loved the poem, keep it up :D
    Love always,
    Your bestestestest friend in the whole wide world, BJ

  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    Hey i like the new name...lol good for u..
    awesome job!i love this poem...u have a lot of talent...i love reading ur work, im glad u put more up.
    ill ttyl i hope,
    xoxo~*rach*

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    I enjoyed reading this poem aaron
    specially this part:
    In the world today one walks alone
    Searching, wondering when they'll take the throne

    you're really talented. keep it up.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Hey, that was reli gud.. deep words in the poem, told it all.. gr8 job with this one.. gud with the rhyme. flow wasnt bad, either.. keep going
    take care
    Nannoush

  • 18 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I can relate to this in a lot of ways.Those empty days, days the writing don't come, or just depressive gray days.I love the title and the throne line-good stuff.The rhyme scheme isn't perfect but it flows smoothly enough to not matter.Any writer, dreamer, loner would be touched by this.Although I'm not sure I care for the end sentiments-Too often mind and heart conflict,the mind is indeed important, but now that I'm older(&wiser-ha-ha!)I've realized that if you listen to and follow your heart it will never lead you wrong.Anyway, keep writing, your talent will only grow.Good job here, if a bit ambiguous.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    What a beautiful poem and yet so true! Excellent write!

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow....

    LISSA

  • 17 years ago

    by cant sleep

    Ur empty thoughts are amazingly full. u dont even know. n e wayz! I havent written for a while, so decided to rite...NOW!!! really, the only thing i have to say......wow!!! LOVE IT!