That was very good i like the way you wrote like starting when you were kids and growing up 5/5

Wow this poem was amazing i am so very glad i cam back and to read it. if this really happend to you i am very sorry. 5.5 keep up the amazing work

Omg...this was....so....sad!
5/5...i loved the flow especially

Whoa i loved
it's so sad too
5/5 for sure
bye take care!

pili

Holy Hell?! This is one of the best poems I've read so far!

"Ii had a broken tooth"

I think you meant "I". =)

"the next time I saw you
years had rolled by
I had a broken smile this time
and you were going to die"

I really like this stanza, but my favouite was:

"the last time I saw you
you just had to part
and I left with nothing broken
nothing broken but my heart"

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

This is excellent stuff....
im amazed & in awe of ur writing... i'd love to read more when i login soon
for now will add u to my favs
5/5
cuz its worth much more
& hey i dont know how anyone could vote u 4.9.... this is way too amazing !
love
amy

O my god...this is my fav. poem that u have written...5/5...dang this is sooooo good. thank i so much for commenting on my poems it really meant a lot...5/5

Great job i have nothing bad to say about this at all 5/5 this is really amazing and i really want to know what happened to the guy??? message me and tell me i'm so curious now lol, but yeah amazing job

Again a poem bursting with emotions and a tail to tell. It took me a second to get into this poem, but I am glad I did. It was a beautiful story, and it hurt to read too . . . why was the boy dying? Was he sick or was he ending his own life? I was really touched by this poem thanks for pointing it out to me.

-Tainted Mikochan

So sad and so cute......you're a very good writer./keep it up...............sorry it took me so long to look at them
xoxo
Cassie

So sad......

Nice poem... very sad... nice job

Wowww...this poem is really nice
i like the way it rhymes...great work :)

--hazha--