Comments : Slowly breaking

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very good and emotional you can feel your pain

  • 18 years ago

    by skyfox

    So well written. Your emotions leap out from the words.

  • 18 years ago

    by pseudo

    Very touching poem.. you expressed how you felt and your emotions very well.. you showed honesty in this one because welol i think its a personal poem is it? well awesome write keep it up =)!

    --emotionless19*

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Very beautiful poem i really liked it.