This is so sweet...you are such a great writer i think that the last stanza is my favorite

Loved this poem too! 5/5

Very good and sweet 5/5

Wow... you have a colorful vocabulary... hehe. 5/5

Nicely written, very powerful wording, i enjoyed it a lot.
5/5
xxx cici xxx

Good job. Well-written and unique formatting. I like the capitolization.
-Kate

Love it, beautifully and subtley done.

That was soo sweet. absolutely beautiful. you are really gifted! keep writing

dawn

Awww i loved it. the wording is alot different than im used to reading. i liked it alot. good job.

Hey...beautiful poem i really like it :)

Amazing job. i loved it. Theres nothing to explain in here because you told us it. Very well done job you have here. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

I absolutely heart your writing style.

You make everything seems so elegant.

My favourite stanza:

"Gentle touch a tender kiss
Something I would surely miss
Our love survived through time's distress
true love survive nonetheless "

The last lne brought everything together.

( )_( )
(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

I liked this you can go from dark to love real easily i cant do that at all im like all dark so your very talented to be able to do that

WOW... i love this poem and your use of language, it really brings the poem togeather... not just the fact that it flows, without completely rhyming, but the fact of how u placed the words in the right order, just makes it perfect... i like this poem SOO much... please comment on my poems too! thank ya!

This is soooooooo cute...awwww...so sentimental..u can tell that u r in love...keep up the great work u r very talented
5/5...kisses

I really liked this poem, too. I agree that ur last stanza was the best and the piece to fit the puzzle together. Good job and keep up the great work
~BJ~

Very pretty poem, with such descriptive emotions. It does remind me of my poem, same idea just different wording. Sorry, I have been working so much lately, I have very little time to write and read others poetry. Take Care, and I will check in when I have some free time to see what other masterpieces you have created. Brooke~

Wow! Amazing job! I really loved this poem! You are very talented at writing poetry! Keep up the wonderful work! My favorite stanzas were:

"Wind blows and dust scattered
rain strikes in thundering sounds
But our eternal love has not shattered
In your warm arms this love still abounds"

"Gentle touch a tender kiss
Something I would surely miss
Our love survived through time's distress
true love survive nonetheless "

I really loved the flow and the rhyme scheme! It was amazing! Great work! You deserve nothing less than 5/5!
Love always,
~BJ~

That was.. beautiful!
I loved the ending.

5/5, just one thing;
"Wind blows and dust scattered
rain strikes in thundering sounds
But our eternal love has not shattered
In your warm arms this love still abounds"

You might want to change it to "Wind blows and dust scatters"
"But our eternal love will not shatter"

Or something.. just because you were using present tense most of the time, I thought 'scatters' might sound better? Either way, well done!

Saiya

The language you use is amazing. very vivid and explanatory. i love it. 5/5