Pretty...nice...i love it...what will make you happy again...is it love...

I really like this poem.its says a whole lot about how your mind can manipulate your hearts speech.5/5
In my poem future sins hidden I didn't really mean Tupac inperticularly.I just wanted to add a random hip hop singer.I listen to heavy metal myself so its not a big deal.Sorry if i offended you.
L8ter CORIE

Wow.. really sad, but the way you put it.. was amazing, I loved it, 5/5

Again, powerful poem, really moving but not boring,

I know that someday, sometime into the future,
There is a chance, a single hope I will feel better.
But for now, I cant see that, I see darkness not light,
So thats why Im sad, all because of this thing called life.

that's my favourite bit.

good work. keep goin.

xXx

Very powerful poem that keeps the reader hooked thoughout. very good :-)

I really liked this poem
"I am full on questions but Im so empty on answers"