Comments : FeElInGs

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    This was very cute.. i liked it ^_^

    "You are my lucky star
    The one I wish upon
    Hopefully you'll make all my wishes come true"

    thats my favorite part, well done :)

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Aw how sweet....lucky person....5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    Wow...your poems are all so good i wish i could write like you! 5/5 Loved it.
    Becky
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by crystal

    Beautyful poem! you did an awesome job showing your feelings. keep it up!
    crystal

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Sέxγ*Måmї~

    I like this poem! 5/5 and thanx 4 the comments on my poems!!!
    keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Brooke

    Wow very nice poem! Written with much talent.

    Brooke

    thanks for the comment on my poem~

  • 18 years ago

    by Heidi

    Your work is soo good! i love all of it, keep on writing, never stop! I love your work and i imagine a lot of other people do too! hope to see some new ones soon! keep it upp..

    *Heidi

  • 18 years ago

    by XxCrazy4youxX

    ~*Aww that was supppa sweet 5++ great work*~ XoXo

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    That is so cute your realy now how to show your feelings gdjob keep it up xxxliltxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Lovely poem. Though,alot of your poetry are pretty short and could be longer. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by *aine*

    Hiya thanks for voting! Urs is better than mine! xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    This is really sweet...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Awww this is so sweet your very talented i think your great and im excited to read more i loved the message this got through this was really good 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Good job, you can still improve the flow

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Its short and sweet, ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Awwwwwww. That's so sweet. I feel that way towards my boyfriend. Keep up the work. I love your poems.
    *skips off to read more*

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    *Commented once*
    Hehe, I am commenting again. =D This poem is so wonderful hun, I love love poems, though I can't write really good ones. Keep up the work.

    PS: THANKS for ALL the comments.

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Grrr lol j/l i love it i feel the same way abou tsome parts any way your an amazing writer keep up the amazing work .5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good topic, some suggestions though: Try to keep a constant rhyming pattern, you can improve the flow.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenn

    It's very nice .. expresses wonder at the begining and lets it all pour out near the end ..