Comments : Siren of My Dreams!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Roberth,
    Great poem 5/5 Thank you for sharing and always keep it up ^_^ Take care and can't wait to read more! :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by gabs

    Excellent 5/5!! Like Always I Love Reading Your Work Keep Writing And I Will Deffinitly Keep Commenting!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Robert,
    You're blessed with talent that is a pleasure to read. great job....

    hugs, love, Ann

  • 11 years ago

    by Serena

    Great job! I really loved this poem! You've got alot of talent...keep it up! Feel Free to check out my poems if you get the chance! :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    I liked it a lot and thought the repetition was pretty effective.. nice flow to it.. from a lot of your works, i see you use commas a lot to augment flow.. to me it is a kind of distraction on first-read, but it does direct the flow.. probably just your style but yea.. the last line of the first stanza seems a bit weird.. you changed the syntax to help the flow, and it worked well, but it just seems a bit awkward where you placed 'her'.. all in all an awesome poem and good use of the technique.. later

  • 6 years ago

    by yogi73

    That was a really nice read. great poem