My Bleeding Secrets

by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child   Sep 27, 2005


Cutting all of these emotions out
trying to find what its all about
lost without hope of finding a way
i dont wanna go but i simply cant stay
the world is just pointless and life really bites
if you dont wanna see this then turn out the lights
anger and sadness has built up inside
nothing can make this pain subside
ungulfed in fury, i drown in guilt
can you get past the wall my heart built
friendless and lonely im falling apart
silently dying in a dark broken heart
look what you\'ve done to me, look what you\'ve made
you grin in triumph as my innocence decayed
stripped me of all i was worth and more
gathered my morals which you threw to the floor
took what you wanted and left me with nothing
only to ponder if im still worth something
searching for truth in all of your lies
but finding nothing but hate in your hazel eyes
why do you loathe me, what have i done?
the war between souls has now begun
you love for fun and fight with rage
im trapped with you inside this cage
fine, take my all, leave me to die
cut out the emotions, my silent cry

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kristie

    WOW! THAT WAS AWESOME! I just finished reading one of your others and i read this and i was like damn....when i thought they couldn't get any better. I can totally relate to this poem. It was really good. Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cassie Mclellan

    Hey
    that is a really good poem..keep writing
    Cassie

  • 18 years ago

    by Paige aka Kayla

    Love it!! love it!! love it!!
    EXCELLENT POEM!!! 5/5
    I THINK THAT EVERYONE CAN REALTE TO IT! PLEAZ COMMENT ON SOME OF MINE!! THEIR WAY WAY DIFFERENT TO YOURS BUT AY! EVERYONES DIFFERENT!
    LOVE PAIGE XOXOXO

  • 18 years ago

    by Whispering*Willow(Mercedes)

    Very intense poem. I liked how each sentence rhymed with the one below it and how the whole structure formed to its powerful ending. I loved it! 5/5 from me and I've added you to my favorites . Cheers, Mercedes

  • 18 years ago

    by hm

    That was deep and i can sooo relate thanks for da comments....

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