I Think Of You (R.I.P. Travis)

by TragicRomance   Sep 29, 2005


Days go by, I think of you,
there's nothing left I can do;

Ever since the day you passed,
a part of me has been gone;
It's sad how things can change so fast,
it's just really hard, and I can't go on;

I think of how things use to be,
I think about you, I think about me;

I sit here alon wondering why,
you still had your whole life to live;
I know you were to young to die,
and now there's nothing I can give;

As I look out into the rain,
I realize things, won't be the same;

Sleepless days and painful nights,
and crying all night long,
I thought everything would be alright,
but apparently, I was wrong;

I think about the time we spent,
and I never knew how much it meant;

I was so close to tasting suicide,
do I be strong or do I give in;
But there are things I must decide,
things will never be the way they have always been;

Days went by, I thought of you,
days go by, I'm still thinking of you;

I try not to think of what I had,
I think of what I have;
and even thogh things are bad,
I love you and miss you Trav;

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cody Jo as you no

    Wow im so sorry about ur lose cody

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    So sad, yet such a pleasure to read.
    Everything flowed very well.
    You have a lot of talent.

  • 17 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Oh, you poor thing. =( I know exactly how you feel to lose someone so young, but so close. My friend's dad died at the age of 38 (sorta old, but still young for the life expectancy), and he acted like my dad. He was perfect. And you really brought that emotion out of me again. =(

    Anyways...The poem was great. The flow was a little off in places, but what can you do, right? I liked the idea of the short verses inbetween the long ones. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Mureen

    Hey, yeah... travis is definetly in my german class... lmao... hes ok, just in case u didnt kno already...
    Hannah

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    This is an outstansing piece of work for a luctuous event. I hope you are fine, and that time will heal this pain you feel. Anyways, the poem is truly fantastic, and full of poetic devices and an efficient structure which help to develop meaning. Very well done. Impressive poem.