It all has to stop.

by AngelWithin   Sep 29, 2005


It has to stop right now,
Before the world goes mad
Everyone finds something wrong
with every girl and every lad.

Every father
Every mother
Every sister
and every brother
Are plagued with cruelty
from the lips of others.

Words of hatred
Words of sin..
Why did all of this have to begin?
It has started and now it needs to end,
Or on my sanity I can't depend.

Theres no love for anyone,
all there is now is hate.
So where has all the love gone?
Or were humans to late?
To appreciate the love we had

As everything has turned so bad.
War around each corner,
Death trhough every door,
How much can a human take?
How much?
How much more?

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  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    A really great idea for a poem but some of the wording is a little um.. choppy. when you said
    Or were humans to late?
    To appreciate the love we had
    or even how you have a variety of forms of poetry in this poem. sometimes its okay to mix up the poetry form but its usually done with a pattern. like how you have
    Before the world goes mad
    Everyone finds something wrong
    with every girl and every lad.
    in this stanza the rhymes are seperated by the middle line. but in stanza 3 they aren't. every other stanza they are though. that makes it sound choppy. but your stanzas fit together wonderfully (each individual stanza) but when they are together it sounds choppy maybe a little chang with the 3rd stanza would sound better. overall this is a good poem. nice job! if you do decide to change it comment me and tell me i would like to read it.