Condemed:Death's Kiss

by Koriey Korrupted   Oct 1, 2005


Ruthless thoughts that are bound
deceitful demons draw me near
screaming without a sound
the monster i face in the mirror quivers with fear

tainted with abusive love
scars and bruises that never heal
flap your wings little dove
so you'll never know how i feel

save the children from this life
a little razor i will lend
stab them with a rusty knife
cause they scream for the salvation of the end

the devil we all are forced to face
the music that disturbs our hearts
innocence shattered without a trace
humanity and twisted reality separated into fantasized parts

the saved can no longer hide
beneath the sunken crack
good and evil will no longer collide
because the savior is coming back

six feet under we all will lie
one by one we're all aligned
as pale faces sink under we all have died
because we're condemned to the depths of our own minds

please rate and comment!!!!!!
thanx CORIE>:-x

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  • 16 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    DEEP DEEP DEEP i I LOVED THE LAST
    PART THE MOST CY

  • 18 years ago

    by whitney

    It was very deep and it was really good

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    Do you see that...you ask nicely for people to rate and comment and do they...no, selfish people, lol. firstly, thanks for commenting on my poem with a poem, lol. secondly, wow, it was great. i especially like the fourth stanzer. your poem had passion and depth, keep it up, and read, vote and comment on some of mine please...even try some of the unvoted and uncommented if you want/i want u 2, lol.
    brad

    p.s. since you put my poem as 5/5, does dat mean im on your favorites list?

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. :)