At first I thought this was going to be a complete women bashing poem, but in all honestly it was beautiful.
"She's all tangled up herself,
but the only thing she worries about untangling is her hair."--I think this is my favourite line. I love how you used the word "tangled" twice, but with different meanings.
Wow,I thought it was a woman hating poem to,but it's beautiful,and thank you for commenting on my poems,yours are so beautiful,I hope to get another poem on there soon,so,if you have time,check it out!!Thanks!!
Good poem. I see you speak truth through alot of it, and being a female myself, it's strange too agree but what would men be without a woman? What would a woman be without a man? They both have their flaws but they each teach each other a different way of living, feeling and loving. x tasha x
Very good i must say....
i know girls are weird lol but thats why you boys love us.. you like the challenge.... you like the game hehehehe
thanks for your comment...
keep up the awesome work
i look forward to reading others n yea
bye for now :):)
be good lol
At first i thought you were goin to be like girls aren't like boys cause they are whatever guys usually think, but i really liked it and i was interesting the way that you would use the same type of words and change them so that they meant something different.
keep up the good writing
I thought this was going to totally bash women but I think you're sorta defending us. I like it in its wierd little way. I think you might want to reastate the thesis as like a conclusion again at the end. Thanks for the comment btw.