Comments : Why girls are not more like boys!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jaime

    At first I thought this was going to be a complete women bashing poem, but in all honestly it was beautiful.
    "She's all tangled up herself,
    but the only thing she worries about untangling is her hair."--I think this is my favourite line. I love how you used the word "tangled" twice, but with different meanings.
    ~Jaime

  • 12 years ago

    by Kirsty Koo

    Wow i really like this poem, very deep not just a woman hater...well done

    Love Koo

  • 12 years ago

    by Firooz

    Thanks dear memebers, I really appreciated your comments, keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by beautifuldisaster

    Wow! you did great. At first i thought it was gonna be totally againtst girls but it isnt. it's very true. I love it. Keep up the good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by beautifuldisaster

    Wow! you did great. At first i thought it was gonna be totally againtst girls but it isnt. it's very true. I love it. Keep up the good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by beautifuldisaster

    Wow! you did great. At first i thought it was gonna be totally againtst girls but it isnt. it's very true. I love it. Keep up the good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Firooz

    Dear (Irresistible_Poison)
    I am searching for your poems, but without success. Would you please forward to me one of your poem id. Awaiting to hear from you soon, with best regards

    Firooz

  • 12 years ago

    by Firooz

    Dear viewers I appreciated your comments and votes, just have a warmth act once more on my new poems.thanks

  • 11 years ago

    by Firooz

    Cumon Guys+girls its a nice thing to help you:P

  • 11 years ago

    by ash

    Wow,I thought it was a woman hating poem to,but it's beautiful,and thank you for commenting on my poems,yours are so beautiful,I hope to get another poem on there soon,so,if you have time,check it out!!Thanks!!

    ashlei

  • 11 years ago

    by Firooz

    Haha this one is like a puzzle..... thanks for all of your comments, cya

  • 11 years ago

    by A Metaphorical Beauty

    Good poem. I see you speak truth through alot of it, and being a female myself, it's strange too agree but what would men be without a woman? What would a woman be without a man? They both have their flaws but they each teach each other a different way of living, feeling and loving. x tasha x

  • 11 years ago

    by Maha

    Ahan,so wat can i comment on this poem,r all ur poem soo much inspired from songs,do u have ur own imagination or ideas?

  • 11 years ago

    by ||The...Nameless||

    Very good i must say....
    i know girls are weird lol but thats why you boys love us.. you like the challenge.... you like the game hehehehe
    thanks for your comment...
    keep up the awesome work
    i look forward to reading others n yea
    bye for now :):)
    take care
    have fun
    be good lol
    from Erin

  • 11 years ago

    by kei

    At first i thought you were goin to be like girls aren't like boys cause they are whatever guys usually think, but i really liked it and i was interesting the way that you would use the same type of words and change them so that they meant something different.
    keep up the good writing

  • 11 years ago

    by crysgurl07

    I like it was very cool
    your a very good writer

  • 11 years ago

    by Nicole Nolen

    Another great poem i must say!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Farida Kira

    LOVED IT lol......great job!! and thnx for the comment...hope 2 read more of ur poems...

  • 11 years ago

    by bc

    I give 5/5 Nice poem =)

  • 11 years ago

    by Mimi

    I thought this was going to totally bash women but I think you're sorta defending us. I like it in its wierd little way. I think you might want to reastate the thesis as like a conclusion again at the end. Thanks for the comment btw.