This place in my head

by Tiller   Oct 3, 2005


There is a place,
In my head,
No body fights,
No body's dead.

I see it all the time,
Its like a little dream,
If only I could go there,
Or like it let it seem.

I want a world,
With no war,
No one steals,
Houses with open doors.

Everybody works,
No one is lazy,
Everybodys nice and smart,
No bodys mean and crazy.

No theifs,
No cops,
No war,
No shops.

Free things,
Free gum,
Free friends,
..Freedom

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  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Sounds like paradise....almost. u forgot the most important thing of all: No pain

  • 16 years ago

    by DeMipiE iNCxXDemiXx

    Nice poem.

    It really basically appeals and relates to everyone.

    (Niice)

  • 17 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    AWSOME WRITING U HAVE A TALENT FOR THIS! (srry for caps)

  • 17 years ago

    by King of The Elements

    AWSOME WRITING U HAVE A TALENT FOR THIS! (srry for caps)

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    I liked it a bunch tyler! keep the good poems up, dude.