Pathetic wish of a writer

Its wonderful even if the flow is different.this poem is so very true. I like how you talk about these different things that writers feel in your own words. Now thats a true poet.

Sarah --
Sorry that I did such an old poem ;; the title just really caught me -- and the fact that like 14 people had given it a 5, well, I had to check it out. This was really good ;; I didn`t feel that it flowed too well, and there was some unintentional rhyming. But don`t change anything about this -- it`s wonderful. 5/5.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood

I agree with Nikki. Poetry to me, is a way to express yourself. Some people on here say things like "you could have done better" or "the rythym was off" when in actual fact, none of that really matters. Sometimes i vent in my poetry and that has nothing to do with rhyming I just let my mind do the writing. It's nice to know what people think, but in the end, the only vote that counts is your own.

"Don't write for acceptance
For forgiveness and pity
Speak for these things
You seek in your dreams. "

I LOVED those line, this poem has a really strong message and I loved it! It's something i bet alot of people can relate with. Great work.

--Steph

This Is a Message That Every Poet On This Site Needs To Be Paying Attention To...This Poem Should Be Brought To Everyones Attention...I Feel Like Writing Should Be For You & You Only...If Its To Impress The Eyes Of Others Than Lay Down Your Pen Because You Can Never Be Called a True Poet...Just An Imitator Of Everyone Else's Appetite For Poetry 5/5
This Was Well Expressed
xoxo-Nikki-xoxo