This is a great poem you had me scared because you said all thatto his face and in the end you put it all in the right way

This is a great poem you had me scared because you said all thatto his face and in the end you put it all in the right way

Wow really good for a first time.

THank yoU!! tHaNk u !!~

Thats a cool poem anyway hope you heal of all the pain put upon you in the past present and the future you got ill skills girl laters peace out

THaNx !!~

Hello there! thanks for rating mah poems! Anyways, wow! is this a true story or what... this is excellent! I love it! Keep it up !

Well i really liked ur poem it was a good one but maybe u can make ur ending alittle better

Hey this is really a good poem i like how u write

Wow Great poem :)

You wrote this really well
good job
thanks for the comment

I actually forgot I read this poem.. And when I read it again right now.. I said to myself... this sounds familiar... LOL... because I already commented and voted... LOL... Great poem...!

Different poem.
but i really liked it.
comment my poems?
thanks

Thats sweet... the beginning was sad but the end was a shock...

Great poem

I like it its so sweet! U kept us on da edge of our seats wondering wat u were goin 2 say! Thats wat real poetry is about!

That was a very good poem. I loved it. I thought something totally different than what you were going for!! Nice turn!!

~love~

I love it!