Comments : WHat yOu truly arE tO mE..

  • 12 years ago

    by Jackie

    This is a great poem you had me scared because you said all thatto his face and in the end you put it all in the right way

  • 12 years ago

    by Jackie

    This is a great poem you had me scared because you said all thatto his face and in the end you put it all in the right way

  • 12 years ago

    by ♥Madison Meeks♥

    Wow really good for a first time.

  • 12 years ago

    by -v-neE-

    THank yoU!! tHaNk u !!~

  • 12 years ago

    by tyzwifey

    Thats a cool poem anyway hope you heal of all the pain put upon you in the past present and the future you got ill skills girl laters peace out

  • 12 years ago

    by -v-neE-

    THaNx !!~

  • 12 years ago

    by LOnightOJmareVE

    Hello there! thanks for rating mah poems! Anyways, wow! is this a true story or what... this is excellent! I love it! Keep it up !

  • 11 years ago

    by Kevin♣♥♦

    Well i really liked ur poem it was a good one but maybe u can make ur ending alittle better

  • 11 years ago

    by rar

    Hey this is really a good poem i like how u write

  • 11 years ago

    by Xox P.a.U.L.i.n.A xoX

    Wow Great poem :)

  • 11 years ago

    by BeeBeeGun

    You wrote this really well
    good job
    thanks for the comment

  • 11 years ago

    by LOnightOJmareVE

    I actually forgot I read this poem.. And when I read it again right now.. I said to myself... this sounds familiar... LOL... because I already commented and voted... LOL... Great poem...!

  • 10 years ago

    by sarahAnn

    Different poem.
    but i really liked it.
    comment my poems?
    thanks

  • 10 years ago

    by Breeeezie

    Thats sweet... the beginning was sad but the end was a shock...

  • 10 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Great poem

  • 9 years ago

    by HillaryNicole

    I like it its so sweet! U kept us on da edge of our seats wondering wat u were goin 2 say! Thats wat real poetry is about!

  • 9 years ago

    by Shotput Girl

    That was a very good poem. I loved it. I thought something totally different than what you were going for!! Nice turn!!

    ~love~

  • 9 years ago

    by Empty One

    I love it!