A gothics thoughts

by deadman   Oct 4, 2005


Heres my life
heres my blade
heres a decision i half to make

im a goth
im a teen
im filled with pain youll never see

i hate my life
i hate my blade
i hate it all,but it helps the pain

tired of this
tired of that
tired of life and all its crap

i stand by myself
i stand alone
i stand up for us,the ones broken

im nothing
im a fly on the wall
watch me closley or i may fall

suicide thought
suicide note
suicide is all i wrote

knife across my wrist
knife acrossmy skin
knife,your my only friend

im myself
im who i am
at least i stand up for what i bealeve in

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  • 14 years ago

    by TheBarefootedCowgirl

    Wow dude that was amazingly written. flow was good, i loved the short line structure.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by josh-and-valerie-together-forever-and-always

    I have another poem called killing is a thrill

  • 18 years ago

    by Jennifer

    This is a really great poem...i'm gonna read more of yours because you seem to write so much of how i feel too...great job :) i always make myself keep living every day...keep your head up...

  • 18 years ago

    by Black~Rose

    I'll stand with you! 5/5

    Black~Rose

  • 18 years ago

    by Evie

    5/5 i like the part where you say "i hate it all,but it helps the pain", cuz thats how i feel

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