Comments : To My Dear Brother

  • 18 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    Aww hunni...im soo sorry but i think he will try to help you now...im here for you hunni...i have a hope that you will get through this..you just have to find tha hope in yourself

    love ya girl
    -angel-

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Aww huni that's really sad:'(...i agree with angel though...and please stay strong...i guess there's no secrets anymore and now he knows, he can be there for support...
    take care xoxox

    great poem

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Sweetie i'm always here. In this case all you can do is hope that your brother is able to start understanding you better now.
    Take care my friend,

    Love always & Forever Sabrina.
    - xx Kalah.

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    A poem agen in which i can relate
    your flow in brilliant too
    i love your work keep it up
    its great xx

  • Aww really sad hun, though i thought it was really good. Have you shown it to your brother? I hope it all works out xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Heather

    Wow..I am speechless..that was really good..At least you got some of your feelings out..sometimes it helps..I hope everything works out.
    Heather

  • 18 years ago

    by Razorblade

    This was excellente! Great job!

    -Taylor

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesse James

    I used to cut, I use the term 'used' to freely as I've been in a good mood lately and haven't wanted to. But I found out my brother was depressed, and suicidal. It broke my heart.
    I'm being strong for him too now.
    I like this poem.
    JJx

  • 18 years ago

    by Hidden Sinx

    Awww I love your poem! There was a tear in my eye. I can relate to the depressed part.. But for me the brother, sister thing isnt something im use to.. When my older sister found out she acted like it was nothing.. not even a big deal.. But sadly she was going through the same thing I was.. I coulndt except myself to not always think about me.. That there are always someone else in need. Me and her are close, but not like we use to be.. Im heart broken for her.. But I cant say she feels the same for me..

  • 18 years ago

    by johannah

    Im sorry hope u feel better and believe in urself theres more to life than what seems.

  • 18 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    Sabrina, that was awesome. I can relate in soooo many ways. I know that you may be hurting right now because your brother found out, but you can't always hide it. Maybe it's a good thing he found out... maybe he can help you. Anyways, keep your head up. I'm always here if you need to talk. 5/5

    Love ya,
    ~ Tina

  • 18 years ago

    by meimei

    I like this poem i can really relate to it.

  • I can really relate 2 this poem. its GREAT!

  • 18 years ago

    by Heidi

    EXCELLENT JOB OMG! this is so sad, but SOO good.. Keep up the good work, you did so welll =D

    *Heidi

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    So sad...i'm crying..:'(

    Just tell him that you love him or you can show all your works to him...try to make him understand...i'm sure later...he'll be okey...i think he's feeling this way because you hide it from him...the person he love most...tell him...okey...

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Thats sad

    i could never tell my brother the things i do or let him ever find out !!!

    Great job !

    i like it !!
    5'5

  • 18 years ago

    by angelcakes649

    Your poem brought back some sadness that I felt a long time ago. It's beautiful and sad, but at the same time it's strong because you wish to make it up to your brother. I had a similar experiance with not my brother, but my mother. Since she found about my problems, she doesn't trust me and it hurts me because I haven't been trying to kill myself in so long. I wish you luck in your relationship with your brother. This poem will hopefully send him the message.

  • Thats an amazing poem very deep .. i'm so sorry .. i hope everythings okay

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost in my past

    Hi. This is a really go poem. It reminded me off so much i've been through and I felt like that for some time. Remember be strong there is people out there who care and always will do. Take Care x

  • 18 years ago

    by tsim

    Dude-
    that is so sad.
    i hade this once befor i was the happpy one.