Comments : One selfish drink

  • 12 years ago

    by ..eliSa*

    I hope you enjoy this poem, it took a lot out of me and is very personal

  • 12 years ago

    by Strange Angel

    This is so beautiful. I'm speechless, i really am. I am also in tears. You have put so much emotion in this,i can understand it took a lot out of you, but it was definately worth it. reading it made me realise how much i want to say before i die. i want to make sure everyone knows how much i love them, and how much i respect and look up to my family and friends. this poem is truly beautiful. i'm sorry i haven't got a wider vocabluarly; my brain has gone into temporary shut down. well done. keep writing (but give yourself a rest first ;)

    beautiful

    x~x

  • 12 years ago

    by Juls

    Wow!
    Lots of emotion n this poem, u said it took alot out of u and i see y but keep on writing!
    Juls

  • 12 years ago

    by Carrie

    Like woah. totally amazing. i mean like woahhh. im speachless.

  • 11 years ago

    by sarah

    Wow .. a very moving piece i really liked it! it was so sad and full of many regrets. like you were coming back to tell your parents how much you cared.. thank you so much for your comments and i have to admit your poem this morning i smiled, it is still one of my favorites and i even mailed it to my cousin and he framed it and put it on his desk. he says everytime he reads it he gets a smile.. it really does change your mood when you read it :]

  • 11 years ago

    by John Fleece

    This is something pure. this is true never give up. You have a gift

  • 11 years ago

    by TormentedSoul

    Awesome awesome job! i really liked reading it, it had so much emotion! awesome job!

  • 11 years ago

    by writing;onthewalls

    Wow elisa I am very empressed!! very well written poem, it actually brought a tear to my eye, keep up the good work!

  • 11 years ago

    by Anton

    This is awsom poetry you are very tallented but it isnt your tallent that amazes me its your ability to manipulate the english language so the world can c ur perspective on life and ur struggle through it. Any 1 an write poetry but very few can write a poem that that can touch anothers heart you are talented in that area well done. pls keep writing. well done again.

  • 11 years ago

    by gabriela

    Wow it reminds me of always but always i wrote when i tried 2 kill myself...i hope your okay and i'm glad u love ur family 2

  • 11 years ago

    by broken hearted me

    WOW i am totally speechless...i can tell this poem took a lot out of you...you did a great job it brought tears to my eyes and it made me realize how much i want and need to say to the people i love before i die....keep up the good work 5/5 ~*~Jenny Lynn~*~

  • 9 years ago

    by Empty Space

    Just raw!

  • 9 years ago

    by Empty Space

    Just raw!