This is so beautiful. I'm speechless, i really am. I am also in tears. You have put so much emotion in this,i can understand it took a lot out of you, but it was definately worth it. reading it made me realise how much i want to say before i die. i want to make sure everyone knows how much i love them, and how much i respect and look up to my family and friends. this poem is truly beautiful. i'm sorry i haven't got a wider vocabluarly; my brain has gone into temporary shut down. well done. keep writing (but give yourself a rest first ;)
Wow .. a very moving piece i really liked it! it was so sad and full of many regrets. like you were coming back to tell your parents how much you cared.. thank you so much for your comments and i have to admit your poem this morning i smiled, it is still one of my favorites and i even mailed it to my cousin and he framed it and put it on his desk. he says everytime he reads it he gets a smile.. it really does change your mood when you read it :]
This is awsom poetry you are very tallented but it isnt your tallent that amazes me its your ability to manipulate the english language so the world can c ur perspective on life and ur struggle through it. Any 1 an write poetry but very few can write a poem that that can touch anothers heart you are talented in that area well done. pls keep writing. well done again.
WOW i am totally speechless...i can tell this poem took a lot out of you...you did a great job it brought tears to my eyes and it made me realize how much i want and need to say to the people i love before i die....keep up the good work 5/5 ~*~Jenny Lynn~*~