Let's Be Friends.

by Jesse James   Oct 6, 2005


I bite your neck; you sigh.
Hot against my ear.
This is too much like sex.
But I don't want to let you go.

So I dig my nails into your sides.
Remind you I have teeth too.
Nail, tongue across your collar.
Tasting all of you.

Try to look into your eyes.
Just to find that they are closed.
Lick your tongue between your teeth.
Place a kiss upon your nose.

And it's over just like that.
Cause I'm scared things will change.
If you looked at me differently.
I'd never be the same.

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  • 18 years ago

    by marie

    Hey, thought id check your poems out as you left a comment on one of mine (thanks by the way), anyway this poem is amazing, i absolutely love it! ive added u to my favourites and i havent even got past your first poem, thats gotta be good. Anyway think we may have things in common, that poem brought up some feelings in me i cant even begin to write about, oh and my poems begin life as txts to! x keep up the good work ;0)

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Wow... Impressive writing. Really intense. I like how you relayed your feelings to the audience without going into great detail explaining everything that happens, letting imagination take its course. Keep it up.
    -Kate

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Um, didnt quite get what it was about.
    Uh, vampires maybe? Okay, but it seemed to have feeling anyway, and it rhymed well.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Steve Hickman

    Wow? really that wasn't wat i expected, but it left me breathless actually. consider me a fan.

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