Comments : Complete For Now...

  • 18 years ago

    by KitchBlood

    Write about how you are not yourself anymore! write about what changed you, I want to hear more.

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    Hey this is great, and im guessing will be excellent when you finish, i think you already inspire others and it is sooo good to hear that you are happier i think you should talk from the heart about what you feel about helping others and how u can relate to them, um well i dunno but im sure youll work it out looking forward to reading it xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Sorry cant think of one. Its good and hope u can finish it soon so i can read more of it. :) latez.

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Write more !!
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • Awesome poem, it shows me the brighter side to alot of things. this poem may have changed something in me. i know your strong. stay that way
    much love
    DDGB

  • 18 years ago

    by Arty

    Wicked poem! you rock. i'm adding you to my favs.

  • 18 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    This is awesome, better then ever!!!! i think you are an angel and you already put a smile on my face and im sure there are many others that feel the same!! you are truely an inspiration talk soon k!!! take care xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Wow. Even better. It wasnt that confusing but all in all it was alot better. Hope to read more really soon and thanx for the comments on my poems and hope im on your favorites list.

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Awesome love, me likie:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Sweet, I liked the unselfish feeling that radiated towards the end of the poem, that was touching, and the words were strange, but still likeable.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by quietlybreaking

    I love this poem hun. fantastic.

    My happiness is just an inch away,
    Waiting for me to just reach out and grab.

    i find that bit is very close to my heart.
    thankyou for the comments you have left me, much appreciated.
    and i promise one by one i will repay the favour, because i love your work.

    mwahh, aylz

  • 18 years ago

    by Tylur

    Love all your poems. Really good. And thanks alot for your comment on mine. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Patiently Waiting~

    That was real good, itwasnt a free flowin poem but it was still real good, 5/5

    the words wer real desription n yeh...all i can say is it was real good

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    That was amazing you are truly talented!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by mo

    Wow! you just gave me the shivers! the feeling a poem brings to you can make you feel so happy! the poem showed a lot of growth and spirituality! and made me smile, and cry! you are an amazing writer! difinitely an inspiration!
    thank you for the wonderful comment! i never though people actaully read my stuff! hahaha!
    ~mo

  • 18 years ago

    by Iyla

    WHooo! im speachless very great i love it one of my favs !!!! your so talented!

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    So real and therfore so true. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Rosie

    I love your poem....actually it gets me deep down, keep up the good work!! and yea..will remember UK =P Rosie xXx

  • Beautiful and uplifting, well done hun, loved reading this poem 5/5