Comments : Hoping for freedom

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Very well written! as an idea for a title?
    Trapped? or somthing like that? it seems to be about that...

    keep up the good work

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by lee

    Hm...idk, I guess you could call it trapt or..something that makes you like imprisoned or something cuz in this poem, tha's what you sound like, a prisoner. but it was good. title or no title. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    How about "Hoping for freedom"

    Good poem by the way.
    Tim