Comments : Painting

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    This is as beautiful as any painting! lovely.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 12 years ago

    by dora

    0hh g0od j0b 0n this darl!! keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    Good job with this poem and thanks for participating in the TOW this week! you brought good views to people and everyone had creative ideas which all turned to be different. wonderful job!

    ~Jacklyn

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Beautiful...and wonderful talent...enjoyed...

    hugs, love, Ann

  • 12 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    JJ, you have a talent beyond your years...beautiful.

  • 12 years ago

    by Fighter

    "nature's melody
    forever mesmerized
    lost in the coloring"

    wow...........im speechless...

  • 12 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow, your imagery is astounding! Truly brilliant!!!! Just an amazing piece....keep it up~Holly

  • 12 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Something different than what I've ever seen but it was good. The imagery was beautiful and so was the well the words which put it all together. Cool work.
    ~Disturbed Unknown

  • 12 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Reading your poem was like looking at the picture itself... beautiful =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Reading your poem was like looking at the picture itself... beautiful =)

  • 12 years ago

    by JJ

    Thanks for the suggestions Mike...really appreciate it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Beautifully done. You have a tremendous talent. The only suggestion I would make, would be to change mesmerized to mesmerizing. Mesmerized makes it sound like natures melody is mesmerized....mesmerizing makes it sound like the melody is doing the mesmerizing. Just a thought. Either way, it is brilliant.

  • 12 years ago

    by Daniel J

    Hee. I do like your style.

  • 12 years ago

    by Soft Rain

    I love this poem it seems like Im looking right at it. Love the ending and keep up the great work!-Claude

  • 12 years ago

    by lisa marie

    Wow outstanding poem. It was beautiful.

  • 12 years ago

    by sarah

    Wow i love poems written about a scene. such as a painting its like Leonardo da Vinci and poe all together.

  • 12 years ago

    by Christine

    Really good:) thanks for the comment

  • 12 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Great JJ! that is a nice perspective to a painting!

    this structure seems really unusual! Maybe u r strting up a whole new style!

    thanks a ton for your nice comments and your faith.

    love, and luck
    shobhana