Comments : Don't cry

  • 12 years ago

    by Ambar K

    Wow, that was really good, KEEP iT UP! check out my poems and tell me what you think

  • 12 years ago

    by Void

    Wow! lol usually I only say this to be nice..but on the odd occasion i really mean it, and..wow! that's amazing!... I'm gonna go read some more from you, hehe.

  • 12 years ago

    by Miss Megan

    Great poem!!..i rele liked it...u poured your feelings out, and thats one thing that i love about poetry...keep riting....i love ur stuff!!*rates 5*
    meg

  • 12 years ago

    by williamcampbell

    Real good one... keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Look you are so good at thins stuff I wish I had half of the talent you had!
    Im also going to read some more of your poetry and comment
    :)
    see ya Ruby
    Emma

  • 12 years ago

    by christina marie

    Wonderful poem, i loved it! 5/5

    ~*♥Lollipop Sweetie♥*~
    a.K.a
    **♥MiMi♥**

  • 12 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    OMG! THAT WAS SO GOOD! WOW!!! THAT IS EXACTLY ME! GEEZ...anyway..wow..u are really gr8! i hope to read more of you, im adding you to my favorites!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 12 years ago

    by .

    Omg...this is so sad...5/5 I love it! Your very talented!
    Becky
    xoxo

  • 12 years ago

    by Lexie

    You are a very talented writer. Keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Tess

    This is just proved truth that you have a warm and friendly heart. Not many people can think about others when they feel they have so much to deal with on their own. To me, this made it clear that you are not selfish to any extent. WOW go girl!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ariana

    I think this piece is quite well done - you've got a different rhyming pattern here and at first I didn't get it, but it's okay cause now I do! :P
    I'd suggest on the last stanza changing the line from 'who cares if I want to die' to maybe, 'or if I want to die' because otherwise it detracts away from the rest of the pice.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kayla

    ONE I TRULY RELATE TO....GREAT JOB..

    KAYLA XOXO

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Great poem, keep it up. The way it was it is very well thought about.
    It is a masterpiece.
    you are very talented
    xxxx
    tara xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Samantha

    Awe... beautiful... very well written...

    keep it up

    sammie

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah Drew

    Once again, beautiful work. I loved this poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Awww
    fabulous poem
    congratulations on coming 3rd too by the way
    you should be proud of your superb poetry
    Garlic Teaser

  • 11 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    Omg that is so beautiful...

  • 11 years ago

    by Allison

    I really like this one. *5/5*

  • 11 years ago

    by Lauren Crandall

    WoW.....deep..amazing....crazy.... beautiful... the list could continue.. you are so talented. and it truly shows in this poem.. its alot like how i feel all the time. i always help others and never mention whats bothering me to them. this is truly a masterpiece!!

    *applauds*

    ←♣Lauren♣→

  • 11 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    Really like it 5/5!