This is just proved truth that you have a warm and friendly heart. Not many people can think about others when they feel they have so much to deal with on their own. To me, this made it clear that you are not selfish to any extent. WOW go girl!
I think this piece is quite well done - you've got a different rhyming pattern here and at first I didn't get it, but it's okay cause now I do! :P
I'd suggest on the last stanza changing the line from 'who cares if I want to die' to maybe, 'or if I want to die' because otherwise it detracts away from the rest of the pice.
WoW.....deep..amazing....crazy.... beautiful... the list could continue.. you are so talented. and it truly shows in this poem.. its alot like how i feel all the time. i always help others and never mention whats bothering me to them. this is truly a masterpiece!!