Comments : Contradiction Feelings

  • 18 years ago

    by Jay

    That was hot how you Switched it up at the end.. that was hot.. Keep up the good work.. I'm really feeling that. even doe it was about my sister!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    Thanks for commenting on one of my poems... this is returning the favor. ;) I like this poem. It's very creative! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Carrie

    Absolutely amazing. i love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Passionate

    ... ... ... ... maybe im dreaming... ... ...
    maybe this i real, maybe this is the way that you feel, maybe it was a waist, maybe i really do have bad taste, maybe your the one hurting, just trying tobe strong and cover it up.... ... ...

    funny how much this is what he`d say.

  • 18 years ago

    by Passionate

    Hey i stole a line from you hope ya dont mind .... it was too good. what to say, your poems suck me in so much and make me believe you are cold hearted. truly good poets do that.

  • 18 years ago

    by Passionate

    People are going to wonder whi i put so many comments on this one, but ne way i knew it wasnt him... the words just made it feel so real. thanx for the comments tho! i look for more from you later!

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Great poem. Wasn't expecting that ending but it was really good. i luved the lines
    "I'm soulless I'm heartless I'm everything you think, if you were the Titanic I'd purposely let you sink"

    Amazing! keep up the awesome work! 5/5
    ~Luvz~
    ~Chica~

  • 18 years ago

    by Natasha

    Very very clear... I wonder who this was for?? anyways, I liked this poem a lot, after thinking of it yesterday I came back to read again.
    I take my time with commenting, cause I don't want to hurt anyone.
    But with this poem, there isn't a critic I can give it's brilliant :D

  • 18 years ago

    by LostSoul

    This goes wrong in the same place again, line spacing, I'm sorry but I think it bothers some other people too, not just me.