Hey Ali,
I'm just sitting here reading your great poem...I like it ^_^ hehehehe, it has been a while since I last read one like this. The flow was really good, nice job 5/5 take care and keep it up.

Again gr8 poem hun u av a real talent!!!

Thanks for your comment i really appreciate it LOVE YOUR POEMS AS WELL lolz :D and ill make sure to write some more just for you lolz j/k