It's a really good poem. I really liked the short, sweet, and to the point part of it. :D

"A love that lasts and eternity
never fades
never leaves
by grows deeper by the day"

I think that you mean an* eternity? and... but* grows deeper? I don't know if those are the words you meant, but the ones that are there now don't make that much sense
Love always,
~BJ~

Very cute. i really enjoyed reading this. I kinda did like it. I mean doesn't make much sense like what BJ said but i mean i can feel the sense in your poem what your feeling keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.