Dying Girl

by Extinct Angel   Oct 14, 2005

Perfect Darkness
Fell upon he life
All the blood
Left upon
A Perfect knife.
A perfect tear
Rolls down her face
No Love from the knife
Is this her place?
Suicidal thoughts on her mind
There is love here but
Inside she's blind
She's an Angel but
She fell through a hole
In heavens floor.
Her soul is broke
Her heart is sore
She sits and cries
Every night before bed.
Been praying to god
To wake up dead
So as she begs to die
She writes a note
And says Good Bye!


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  • 9 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Very emotional bcoz sometimes we just wish to wake up dead...It's the only way to end pain and suffering..
    Good job,keep it up..

  • 10 years ago

    by Sarah

    A very moving piece,
    Great job

    Best wishes,


  • 10 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    I like emotional poems. this is vry emotional. on other words i rrly like it <333333

    i also kno how you feel.

  • 12 years ago

    by Flower Child[hippie]

    An emotional peice of writing to say the least

  • Aww i really like this poem..keep up the great work...