That was an amazing poem, it just all.. fit.. and it had a nice flow 5/5 thnx for commenting me

Excellent, excellent poem very touching love it =)

It just to good i like it...=p

Thx for the tittle i hope u dont mind if i use it

Very nice, well written.
It flowed well all the way through, i liked the idea, and emotion behind it.
I can relate to this in many ways.
5/5

Thanks for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

This is such a great poem! i love it! i can totally relate! life can be so f u k i n hard but don't give up! it will work out, it usually does, u just need to hold on coz things are always going to go wrong but thats just the way life goes, but i no that if you look inside yourself you will find that you are strong and can make it thru! thanx so much 4 ur comment i really appreciated it! 5/5 hun keep up the great work! if u need someone im here

luv Maddy xxx

Amazing poem. I loved it!! I really relate to it with what has been going on in my life lately. Never stop writing..5/5
~*Amber*~

This so sad! But must say it's a wonderful poem! Love it! Great job!

Probably the best poem i've read in weeks. bravo.. xox leah

Great Job! I love it! I can feel the depression and hated! it makes me squee with emotions lol! PROPS!!!