Why Does He Take Pride In My Pain?

by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child   Oct 14, 2005


Pain, agony, endless pain
it is all i felt and all that remains
baby blue eyes squeezed shut tight
trying hard to escape the sight
I chance a look but all im seeing
is his hazel eyes so cold and unfeeling
just stop now, spare me please
for a moment he pauses but just to tease
he hovered above me and committed his crime
proving his hate for me one last time
as his absolute final act
he lowered his head and bit my neck
a drop of blood runs over my shoulder
I look, his gaze became even colder
he gets up and grins in triumph over his victim
I wont tell, so there will be no conviction
smug and cockey he departs
pleased that he shattered my frail heart

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  • 18 years ago

    by hm

    Hey great poem keep shining!

  • 18 years ago

    by hm

    HEY...GD POEM LOTS OF EMOTION....THERE IS ONLY 1 THING I CAN SAY KEEP STRONG...EVERY1 GOES THRO SHIT/PAIN JUST THERE RPEOPLE WHO GO THRO MORE....

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    Very dark and mysterious.. I loved it. 5/5 none to less. take care xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    Wow
    that poem was so well done!!
    keep it up=)
    lotsa love
    lostlllsoul

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aww hun i an definetly relate to this right now its gorgeous hun i loved it you've done a great job hun keep it up lubb youu

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