Walking the Path to Suicide

by Unforgiven Retniap doolb   Oct 16, 2005


Climbing to the top,
of this bottomless pit,
Probably going to give up,
might fall or rest and sit.

Walking on this road,
leaves cover the ground
No clue where it leads,
but just hoping I'll be found.

Searching in the dark,
hoping for the best,
and when I become weak,
In the darkness I'll still rest.

It's different from dark,
that is searching for light,
for this is never ending black,
that only finds comfort in the night.

Bloody arms,
Blood shot eyes,
Dark thoughts,
heavy Black lies.

Where does it all lead,
besides secrets that you must hide,
Where does it all lead,
besides a dark alley and suicide.

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  • 17 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    Good poem, very descriptive! I have a silmilar called here I am! I really liked it there was a lot of emotion in it and the flow was really nice, I feel that you "walk" should have went on a little longer though...........

    -ann

  • 17 years ago

    by RetroRavey

    That was...different. I've never read anything quite like that. It was good though. I liked it bunches. 5/5

    Ravyn

  • 17 years ago

    by Princess09

    Great poem,wonderfully written. So many people have been there including myself and that was on the spot!!!
    ~~Sweetie

  • 17 years ago

    by Kyleene

    Good poem! You are a really good writer!

    -Kyleene

  • 18 years ago

    by Katelyn Boudreau

    My name is katelyn i live in the next state over in rhode island, i lyk ur poem it was good.

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