Each and every way

by Bradley Peter   Oct 17, 2005


I spent a week in pure despair
because i took a deadly dive
while falling in that hole i didn't care
because i just didn't feel alive

i was angry, upset and confused
and i did something terribly wrong
and what made me more bemused
i thought we we're going strong

i said some things i didn't mean
those things hurt you i know
i wish those words would have never been
i wish i could take back that blow

because of me you got hurt
believe me i feel shame
but on love I'm not expert
but i feel bad all the same

I'm the same guy i always was
i don't want things to go bad
I'm saying this all because
i don't want to lose what we had

you know I'm nothing without you
that week i thought of suicide
if you had only said what you knew
you wouldn't have left my side

so lets do it right this time
lets just say what we think
doesn't matter if it don't rhyme
i just don't want us to sink

you know i love you so much
but still I'll say it everyday
your the one i want to touch
in each and every way

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  • 6 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Sometimes, there are no second chances.
    I did the same. I hurt someone, and I tried real hard to tell her how much I felt ashamed of what I have done.
    I never got second chance. I miss her everyday.

    • 6 years ago

      by Bradley Peter

      I'm sorry to hear that, but from that you've gain an experience and wisdom that you'd not have had, had you not lost her.

      I can't be sure, but like a lot of my pieces, I believe this poem to be complete fabrication.

      Also, I'm so sorry to you and all that have read this. Please forgive me. Reading this poem now I had to stop several times. It is absolutely horrible with next to no redeeming features other than the structure and that it actually rhymes where it's supposed to. But of course, it was at the start of my writing journey.

  • 13 years ago

    by Raven

    You know I adore your writings...Just wish you were my boyfriend... I know I would never be unhappy! Amazing poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    I liked this work of yours. A good poets pen you have, I think many of us have been in this mood of your poem at least a few times in our lives. nice...

  • 16 years ago

    by Sammie Jo

    Wow, this is a really good and sweet poem!!! ~Sam~

  • 17 years ago

    by bubbles

    Sup, i love this poem so much. so much passion, it made me tear up! this is def a 5/5 but would be higher, if possible! keep it up.

    bubbles or sam