You fall in my tear

by Tiny Reader   Oct 17, 2005


I love you, I miss you
But I'm not going to cry
Cause forever and always
I'll look to the sky.
For hope and for guidance
I'll travel so far
But in the end I'll return
To the sparkle in my eye.

I love you, I miss you
But you are still here
Cause whenever I'm lonely
You fall in my tear.
You're part of my substance
Of what makes me, me
So whenever I miss you
I know that you're near.

I love you, I miss you
This will always be real
And it's true I won't see you
But your presence I'll feel.
You'll always be with me
In memories of love
So I won't go on crying
Or break what you healed.

My heart was not ready
For life to adjust
And when you left me
I was about to give up.
And when I felt down
Afraid of a smile
You came back to me
And regained my trust.

You never let go
Just watched me go forward
Treating me special
And yet being cautious.
You trusted my instincts
But let me fall back
If ever I needed,
When confidence lacked.

You gave me support
From there by my side
I love you, I miss you
But I'm not going to cry.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    So sweet...........and very romantic poem! i felt the sweetness w/ this poem its great! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I thought this was beautifully worded. Particularly liked these lines

    I love you, I miss you
    But you are still here
    Cause whenever I'm lonely
    You fall in my tear.

    This had a lovely flow almost like a tear lol. Sweet and enjoyable piece.

  • 17 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    Its Weird That I've Had The Chance To View This Poem At a Time Where It Really Relates To Me...You Already Had Me At 5.0 When I Read This "You fall in my tear.
    You're part of my substance
    Of what makes me," I Knew It Would Only Get Better, And I'm Always Right...Keep It Up...I'm a Fan
    xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    @...wow...im speechless..u have this perfect rhythm in ur poems that makes them that much better:):)...keep on writting:):)...@

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Wow! I'm speechless. This was a fantastic peice. I thought the flow was great! Didn't feel rocky at all. And I loved the way you expressed your emotions in this one. It was very well written. Pleasure to read =) Keep up the fantastic work! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

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