Wow,incredible poem. So sad, and i love the way you write. Great work Juls xxx

Awww. That's so sad. =[. 5/5 *hugz*

-PassingAngel

Hey juls..
this is ...excelent.... wow.... keep that up gurl.... 5/5...i can completely realte. when ur just laying there in the dark just waiting to stop breathing.

well keep up the poems this is a reeeaaaallly good write..lylas...always and forever,

becca

Hey hun gwd poem n gwd work!!! it really sad hope yr ok...*huggles* k keep it up kk mwa mwa xoxoxoxoxxo
i gave it 5/5

Wow ..its really good ...i would say keep it up ...but i dont want u to keep cutting ..... i know how harsh life can get ...trust me on that...but i know u will get thru it if u accept it and move on ahead ..it was hard 4 me ...and it still is ..but i recon u will have a great life ..if u get past this s***

good job...
5/5 in a sad way

ReNeE
xox

Omg juls this is so freaking kick azz awesome!!!! i so fu(king love this sh!t!! keep writing more soon!!!

This poem is awesome!!! its very emotional and i love that... 5/5 keep it up

I LOVE IT! Keep it up! 5/5

Very nice, keep it up

Wow hun that was good n really deep!! Loved t Luvs me lol check out mine "last Night" if u hve time

~*WoW that is really good! and really sad stay strong and keep up the great work 5++*~ XoXo

I dunno if i commented on this one yet but if i did oh well ill comment again.i love this!!! lol.keep writing.love u,lost one

Well done, i liked the repeat of the same verse and the way you changed the ending in the last stanza fitted very nicely. keep up the good writting

*jackie*

Deep and dark can be related to my cold dark heart!!!
just for you my hun!!!
from christopher davidson!!!

Very good work, as always Juls 5/5

The rhymes are very good.
There's a lot of feeling into it.
Its really great.

This is awesome poem sweets!55

Hun, this is fantastic!! TOP MARKS HERE! Welcome! Tess xoxo

Dude i love your poems! =]

5/5