I want to be with you

by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ   Oct 18, 2005


I look in your eyes
and all i see is lies
days and days pass
And my love for you slowly dies

I want to be with you
and baby that is true
but i don't want to feel pain
anymore than you do

I taught our love was forever
But it's more like whatever
i never taught you would leave
your heart i was trying to conceive

staring into the eyes
that i will one day call my baby
how could i have fallen so in love
with someone I've known for years
not even knowing that
he'd be the one
to reveal my worst fears

*This poem goes out 4 my one and only Marco..we did have a little fight and that's why i wrote this poem...i know its not the best that i have written but i seem to like it...hope u do too...*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This is another great poem i would enjoy seeing you talk about other things though while it's great that you have perfected love poems i think it'd be nice to see a different kind, ecspeically cause all your love poems are about the same thing basically

    anyways

    I taught our love was forever
    But it's more like whatever

    you spelled this word wrong in your last poem too, did you mean thought?

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    Another great poem lol your such an awesome writer keep writing them cuz ill be looking forward to reading them! 5/5
    Becky
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Totally my prob 2..our luv he said was 4evr but it turned 2 watever...but hey not my prob. ill deal..lol

    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Wwl soo sweet. I absolutlely loved this. Whoever you love this much is def. a lucky person~ keep up the great work ~ it had a wonderful flow and it went together very nicely. 5/5~ xox take care xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Kacey Lynne

    That was good and i like it, your a good writer and i like the stuff you write alot, i used to be like that untill i foound Ryan and i love him so much i hope one day you will find someone else to love like i did.

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