HEY NENA! 5/5, I LOVED IT!! SRY BOUT U AND MARCO!! AND I KNOW HOW U FEEL. BUT I THINK I MIGHT BE FEELING WORSE RITE NOW :(. THANKS 4 ALL THE COMMENTS THO!
LUV YA!

A few minor errors, "i taught" should be "i thought" but other then that a good poem

Wow, i love it. I grabbed matention from the very beginning and held it all the way through. Great job.

Oyyyyy! This was such a fantastic piece! It is sooooo good, very few minor grammar mistakes, but you are good, so you will correct them! So, the poem, itself, was very good, and got my attention since the very beginning! You are a professional!

I wish I was MArco! LOL

That was good and i like it, your a good writer and i like the stuff you write alot, i used to be like that untill i foound Ryan and i love him so much i hope one day you will find someone else to love like i did.

Wwl soo sweet. I absolutlely loved this. Whoever you love this much is def. a lucky person~ keep up the great work ~ it had a wonderful flow and it went together very nicely. 5/5~ xox take care xox

Totally my prob 2..our luv he said was 4evr but it turned 2 watever...but hey not my prob. ill deal..lol

~*Who Cares?*~

Another great poem lol your such an awesome writer keep writing them cuz ill be looking forward to reading them! 5/5
Becky
xoxo

This is another great poem i would enjoy seeing you talk about other things though while it's great that you have perfected love poems i think it'd be nice to see a different kind, ecspeically cause all your love poems are about the same thing basically

anyways

I taught our love was forever
But it's more like whatever

you spelled this word wrong in your last poem too, did you mean thought?

5/5