What Reality Hides

Dude awsome poem its like the feeling that you get in the inner darkness but awsome keep it up dude (^_^)

This some dark poetry way beyond
me but i read over and over , It
just sounds so good.

God damn it girl! this i think is my favorite poem by you. i'm not even sure what to say. there's so much depth, passion, darkness and thought in this masterpiece. The wording is very, very creative and the stanzas are well structured. there's only one bad thing about this poem...all the stanzas are so good that i can't pick a favorite, but i can narrow my favorite lines down to two 'because the scars we forever reep' and 'if we only look to take'. well done indeed love.

Brad

P.S. sorry i haven't commented on your other recent works but i've been quite busy, but i'll get straight on to them

Hii.. wow that was realli gr8... i love ur quotes to there awsum. leave a comment on mien plz. Mwa nat

Wow...i love this one...one of my fav...this is nice...really good...beyond amazing...totally awesome...