Cuts

by BECCA lessTHANthree   Oct 19, 2005


Bleeding red and
dripping black
hoping not
to come back
losing hope
its all gone now
slowly falling
breaking down
bc you hurt me
kill me good
keep me crying
like you should
its your job
its what your for
kill me kill me
kill me more
I cant take it
All this pain
Bleeding tears
Stuck in this rain
The world is gray..
No it’s all black
I’ve fond the point
Of no turning back
So take me take me
Take me now
Kill me fast
And bring me down
Cut me kill me
Sharp and deep
Let it bleed
And let it seep
Let it drip right out of me
Dripping red
It stains me black
Leaving here
No coming back
Its not for while
This is death
Ill take a knife
Then hold my breath
And slowly slowly
I will cry
Ill carve your name
And then;;
Ill die

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This is the best poem i've ever read!!! seriously, this is my favorite one of yours, i love it with some major passion! ur such an amazing writer! i want to tell you my favorite part, but i absolutely love the whole thing! im sorta at a loss for words, graet job though!!! 10/5... if i could...

    Forever*Yours

  • 17 years ago

    by Doesnt matter

    Wow.. your so emo

  • 17 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Lovesssss it!!! lol im commenting again :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Andi

    Thx 4 the comment...this poem is so sad...it was hard 2 read cause 4 me it hit so close to home! if u ever need 2 talk email me!
    andi

  • 17 years ago

    by Kylie

    Hmm...more wows! I'm pretty sure i'm going to have to add you to my favorites now! =) I'm not sure if it's just because i can understand basically everything about your poems or what...but they're great!

    *Awesome Job!*

    x.xBrokenx.x