Comments : The Happy Ending :)

  • 13 years ago

    by shae r

    Wow!! this is a really great poem and really origanal 2!! keep writing and stay true
    xoxo Shae Radford

  • 13 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    Wow this poem is amazing
    it has such s "voice" to it
    i love the analoges
    great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Bleed-Like-Me

    Beautiful..
    wow...

    i loved it...so much.

    incredible.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ashley

    Another awesome poem you wrote! I would really appreciate if somebody with your skills would take a look at some of my latest poems and tell me what you think! =)
    I hope I hear from you

    xx A.

  • 13 years ago

    by HighPerfection

    Omg its so good the cancer thing has a definate imapct keep it up you've got talet way to go !!!

  • 13 years ago

    by ChaoticSchemer

    That was a very well written poem. I like the way it didn't rhyme, but yet even without a rhyme scheme, the words still flew together very well. Well done!

    *keep smiling*
    Katy

  • 13 years ago

    by boo boo

    Right!!!>>>>.....

  • 13 years ago

    by Arthur

    ... well u write in the same style i do, good job

  • 13 years ago

    by ~!~ Amanda Kay ~!~

    Outstanding... I loved it... Keep it up!!!

  • 13 years ago

    by Lyn

    This poem is too dark for me.It is steeped in self-pity. Real love desires the best for the beloved not the destruction of slit wrists. The challenge is to live life not to exit in self-pity.

  • 13 years ago

    by Kimeko Lancaster

    WoW!! your words had so much strength to them. This poem is amazing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Lithium

    Wow this was really well written great work i loved it sad yes but really well done xox rc

  • 13 years ago

    by Jemma

    Well i liked it yet its a wee bit depressing lol.
    I liek the blood word bit particularly

  • 13 years ago

    by Jemma

    Well i liked it yet its a wee bit depressing lol.
    I liek the blood word bit particularly

  • 12 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Wow... simply amazing, hun. You've got so much talent!!