The Difference Between Rain And Tears

by Anthony   Oct 22, 2005


The tears that escape from my eyes,
Match the rain that falls outside.
Looking at the window, watching the rain.
Not seeing the window, not looking at the rain that falls.
How could you come back after you
Caused me all this pain?
You did this to yourself
You are the only one to blame.
The words that are, "I Hate You"
Could never be enough
To express the sorrow that you've grown
Inside the heart I thought was unbreakable.
The rain falls but what does it mean?
It feels like the world is sad because I am...
This could never be true,
Like you, the world has never
Cared for me like it pretends to.
Because you're in my life,
Is the reason this pain is killing me.
Rotting me from inside...
This hurt, Powerful pain...
It has nowhere to go
Like me... Thats why we belong together.
Pain and me, Me and pain...
The pain you planted in my soul,
So that I could loose the very notion of love...
Causing peptic ulcers,
Causing the taste of blood,
This pain, Killing me from inside..
The rain on my window... My tears on the sill...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 poem! keep up the gr8 work! 5/5!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This is also an original poem! Keep writing. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lucy Loves Not

    I like the idea of tears on the sill. Very metaphoric. "Loose" should be "lose".

    I enjoyed the hurt and betrayal that you portrayed in this poem. As a reader, I can appreciate a poet who can connect with their readers.

    Good write.

    Christa

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    That was deep, and even though the words were quite simple, it still afforded the poem a certain type of calm beauty which was very interesting to read. I like emotional poems, and I certainly liked this one!

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Wow! That was a very deep poem! The emotion was sensational! I really loved this poem. I can feel the pain. Great job! My favorite part was the ending:

    "So that I could loose the very notion of love...
    Causing peptic ulcers,
    Causing the taste of blood,
    This pain, Killing me from inside..
    The rain on my window... My tears on the sill... "

    Wonderful ending! Good job! Keep up the great work!

    ~BJ~

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