YoU WaLKEd AwAy

by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ   Oct 22, 2005


All my life I've dreamed of loving someone like you
it was true
But never had i once taught
that you'd leave me on the spot
i looked in your eyes
and then you looked away
i knew that u weren't here to stay
you said it was just a one time thing
just a little fling
i loved you more than i could ever say
but all you did was walk away
i have given you all the love
i could give
even my life- to let u live
i still love you deep inside my heart
but when you walked away
....my whole world fell apart!!!

~*~*once again this is for my one and only Marco...u know i love you baby...don't ever leave because without you i don't know what I'd do...i love you...and to all of you out there that have a person that u love hold on to them...and never let them go...comment and vote...kisses~*~*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I love your poems i love your style for some reason you seem to make a lot of realllly small spelling mistakes which are kind of annoying sometimes i think you only one in this poem and it was

    But never had i once taught
    that you'd leave me on the spot

    should it have been thought?

    anyways 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by dragonfly

    Hey, this is really good, honestly i am not one for love poems although i was cheated on once yea it sucks, luckily i didn't care about the guy much at the time...you should sit down and tell marco how you feel, it may hurt to say those things to him, but it may help him to understand...

  • 18 years ago

    by nightschild

    Wow, really beatiful
    uve got some skill girl
    keep writting
    xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    Awww thats so cute!! lol i love it! 5/5 deffinately great job keep it up
    Becky
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    GREAT poem... Had truth & meaning behind it. Keep it up... I hope to read more.
    -Kate
    P.S. Check out my poem, "Because I'm Crazy"... I think you'll like it.

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